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句法方面做得很棒，但是从句不多；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。
Dear mary, It's the time again for the staff to have some activities to celebrate the New Year's Day. I know you and some young guys have planned to hold an informal party. But I think we need some difference this year. As I'll be in Beijing for a week, It is up to you and young guys to decide on the time and place of the party. Please let me know your final decision and whether I need do any preparation in advance.
