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Recently there is a heated discussion about whether the government should put a "pollution tax" on private drivers. The opinions are divided. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of this measure that is beneficial to the environment. Nowadays there is growing number of people who own the private cars because of the better living conditions. But the society is also faced with the worse environment due to the air pollution. Putting a pollution tax on private cars will encourage drivers to use public vehicles, bicycles or walk, which will definitely reduce the carbon emission. At the same time, when people use cars less to save money, it is a good way to relieve the traffic congestion which is a serious social problem at present. To sum up, great emphasis should be put on the problem of environmental protection. We all only have one earth to live in. Although it may become inconvenient for people to go out, I believe the benefit that it can bring to society is larger.
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