- 分享到:
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
字数：300 满分：100分
可适当增加几条从句；作者词汇量积累不错，能较灵活地使用高级词汇；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
The advantage of being careful with money Recently, There is a hot debate on whether people, including students are supposed to be careful with money since they try their best to save money. Some people argue that it doesn't make a smart consumer. However, in my opinions, the advantage of being careful with money outweight its disadvantage. On the one hand, being thrifty is an one of Chinese traditional virtues. A good habit of being careful with money help people go through difficult financial situation. What's more, people with the awareness of thrift are inclined to rational before they decide to buy anything. Especially for students, they are still depending on parents for financial supports. The consciousness of thrift keep them definitly avoiding any unnecessary waste. On the other hand, being careful with money, in fact, enables people to practising managing their money, which teaches people to make the best use of the limited money. All in all, being care with money benefit people greatly.So it is advisable to purchse anything in a rational way.
