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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

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There is a widespread saying that it's unwise to make decision without thinking.As we know,long time will be spend before a successful person make a conclusion,however majorly people can't do that. Our life involve kinds of obstacles and setbacks,thinking is a key to ideal life. To begin with,when you are in dilemma,thinking can provide solution to you due to make you clam down .For instance,you full of nervous when you have trouble without anyone's help.Thinking and analyzing the environment is the first step to get out of the trouble. What's more,thinking can urge us to be a person who are intellect. In addition ,if you make conclusion too impetus that you would miss the original fact.For example ,you may witness the part of phenomenon that can't represent the true meaning. All in all,only spending time in thinking instead of making conclusion too quickly by short time seeing and listening, can you make a right decision.

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