2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加从句的使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇。

With the developing of technology,more and more people use computer every day. They use it with work or have fun,but which they use for,it can present computer is important for human at that time. In 19th,the first computer produced,because people needed it to calculate some difficult things,although it is very expensive to make it. after this,computer developed so fast that people cannot believe some years later they can use it in their home. Because of computer,many companies can earn much money than before.Now almost every home have a computer, people can use it suffering Internat,they could though news or play computer games or watch movies,they can do anything they want.When they go to work or go to school,they have to learn how to use computer with their work. People realize computer have become very important in their life,many people communicate each other by computer ,if one day, computer disappeared,I think it is very terribble to this world.