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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
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作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累还不够,拼写错误也要注意;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

With the development of internet, we come to a live with high speed. It is easily for us to draw a conclustion when we look at things or hear of things at the first time with thinking more. There would be things wrong if we continue to do those. Firstly, we will get a wrong conclustion. For example, you will make a person a bad guy who you looked fighted with a old man at the first sight. But you don't know the reason why he fight, maybe the old man is a thief. Secondly,we will lost the ability to think. More and more people are interested in spreading the passages in the Wechat app. They just feel the passage is reasonable, but they make no sure whether the things in the passage is true. The more we spread the passage without thinking, the more possible will we lose our ability of thinking. Lastly, we won't get systematical knowledge. For our students, we must spend time to understand the things we look or listen in the class. If we are not consentreaded on the class, we will miss some important detials. Above all, we can get a conclustionthat it is of vital significance for us to think more after hearing or looking something. The more we think, the better understanding we will make.

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