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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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education pays had became a hot topic during this days.about this problem vary from person to person.some may think that people had study more can earn more.however,in my opinion,i think even if we can't earn more,we need to try our best to do something. as we all know,with the development of world.we have pays more to education than our forefathers.however,from the table,we can learn even if we had study more we are also unemployment from it.surely,there are too much man study little and earn less.to be honest, it means that we need study and never stop.as the saying goes "there is a will,there is a way." never give up,believe yourself.

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