Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;衔接成分偏少;文中从句数量稍显不足,注意个别有错误的句子。
education pays had became a hot topic during this days.about this problem vary from person to person.some may think that people had study more can earn more.however,in my opinion,i think even if we can't earn more,we need to try our best to do something. as we all know,with the development of world.we have pays more to education than our forefathers.however,from the table,we can learn even if we had study more we are also unemployment from it.surely,there are too much man study little and earn less.to be honest, it means that we need study and never stop.as the saying goes "there is a will,there is a way." never give up,believe yourself.