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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892[网页划词已开启]
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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With the development of internet, we come to a life with a high speed. It is easy for us to draw a conclusion when we look at things or hear of things at the first time without thinking more. There would be things wrong if we continue to do those. Firstly, we will get a wrong conclusion. For example, you will make a person a bad one who you looked fighting with an old man at the first sight. However, you do not know the reason why he fight. Things are that maybe the old man is a thief. Secondly, we will lose the ability to think. More and more people are interested in forwarding the passages on the internet. They just feel that the passage is reasonable, but they make no sure whether the things in the passage is true or not. The more we forward the passage without thinking, the more possible will we lose our ability of thinking. Lastly, we will not get systematical knowledge. For us students, we must spend time understanding the things we look at or hear of in the class. If we are not concentrated on in the class, we will miss some important details. Above all, we can get a conclusion that it is of vital significance for us to think more after hearing or looking something. The more we think, the better understanding we will make.

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