作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
from: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date: Dec 23th,2008 to: sales-department@hotmail.com subject: check your product list Dear Mr. Johnson we have received 3000 products for your company on the Dec 22th, but according to our signing of the No.35 order ,products the number of should be 3500, other 500 we have not received so far.Please check your product list and We are looking forward to your early reply. your faithful, Wang Haiyang