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从句使用量不足；层次分明，但过渡词欠缺；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇使用较丰富，但拼写检查要重视。
Shanghai is one of the most famous cities is China. It has two hundreds years of history.Now,it is one of the largest financial and economical center in China.It is famous for its public order,safest social security.Also ,it is one of most wealthy and properous big cities too. As an important economic and finacial center and shipping hub , people from all over the world is coming here ,or make it as one of the most popular tourist resorts.More and more international conferences is addressed here , for example ,the AIIB was take a meeting here. People of this city is opening to accept new thing , they work harder and harder .I think its tommorrow will be better!
