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错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇使用较丰富，但拼写检查要重视。
Shanghai is one of the most famous cities in China. It has two-hundred years of history.Now,it is one of the largest financial and economical center in China.It is famous for its public order,safest social security.Also ,it is one of most wealthy and properous big cities too. As an important economic and finacial center and shipping hub , people from all over the world is coming here ,or make it as one of the most popular tourist resorts.More and more international conferences is addressed here , for example ,the AIIB was take a meeting here. People of this city is opening to accept new thing , they work harder and harder .I think its tomorrow will be better!
