小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式多变，多多练习从句的使用；作者词汇表达较灵活，但请但仔细检查词汇的拼写。

I have a good firend ,she name is Lily,we met each other in university.She look like very warm.She has round face,big eyes ,samll norse,long and far more hair,she is vrey buiterful.She had like played baskerball befor attend work,calssmates had called she tough girl.She ofen had helped other does what she can do .I haven't seen her for five years after finish shool,I what miss her