小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend ,her name is Lily,we met each other in university.She looks like warm more than.She has round face,big eyes ,small norse,long and far more hair,she was a vrey beautiful.She had likes played baskerball before attend work,classmates had called she tough girl.She often had helped other does what she can do .I haven't seen her for five years after finish school,I what miss her