2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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The most ineresting place I would like to take my friends see is the Shaying River.It floats around my hometown , people call it as our ''mother river''.It has a long history from ancient times to today,no one can exactly say the time that it begin to embrassed our hometown. There are all kins of flowers blooming in the Springs,people can irrigant their field ,fish in it .Ship also can float on it ,so as one of the useful translations here.In my memory,when I was a little baby,I played with my friends along it.It gives all of us good times. Today,it is becoming a fomous travel resort, more and more turists come here.I am very pound of it and welcome firends from all over the world to visit it ,you will be love it too.