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Do you think that is truth what you see and what you hear?In my opinion,if you make the conclusion at once ,this is fool. AS old saying goes ,many thing will treat you ,because you didn't know the thruth what is.and if you don't konw that thruth that you see or hear.In our life ,many people in order to get something to treat someone.
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