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In China, the parent always spare no efforts to help their children and even make important decision, regardless of what are their children real need. Because they believe that it is in their children's interests. Fnially children's growth and education always yeild to the the parent's willing. If the parent decide their children to join a afterschool class in order to improve the chance to get in the key school. Their will hold on their decision, even though the children is not interest on this. however, in America, the parent will respect their children's opinion and pay more attention on their views when the parent make a decision. Maybe, Chinese parents take the education seriously is a good thing, but they should learn how to get a balance between parents and children from American parents when they are involved in the education.
