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In China, the parent always spares no efforts to help their children and even make an important decision, regardless of what are their children real need, because they believe that it is in their children's interests. Fnially children's growth and education are always yield to the parent's will. If the parent decides their children to join an afterschool class in order to improve the chance to get in the key school. Their will holds on their decision, even though the children are not interesting on this. However, in America, the parent will respect their children's opinion and pay more attention to their views when the parent makes a decision. Maybe, Chinese parents take the education seriously is a good thing, but they should learn how to get a balance between parents and children from American parents when they are involved in the education.