语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。
In China, the parent always spares no efforts to help their children and even make an important decision, regardless of what is their children real need, because they believe that it is in their children's interests. Fnially children's growth and education always yield to the parent's will. If the parent decides their children to join an afterschool class in order to improve the chance to get in the key school, their will holds on their decision, even though the children are not interested on this. However, in America, the parent will respect their children's opinion and pay more attention to their views when the parent makes a decision. Maybe, Chinese parents take the education seriously is a good thing, but they should learn how to get a balance between parents and children from American parents when they are involved in the education.