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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10533
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。

用户练习作文:

In China, the parent always spares no efforts to help their children and even make an important decision, regardless of what is their children real need, because they believe that it is in their children's interests. Fnially children's growth and education always yield to the parent's will. If the parent decides their children to join an afterschool class in order to improve the chance to get in the key school, their will holds on their decision, even though the children are not interested on this. However, in America, the parent will respect their children's opinion and pay more attention to their views when the parent makes a decision. Maybe, Chinese parents take the education seriously is a good thing, but they should learn how to get a balance between parents and children from American parents when they are involved in the education.

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