小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a goodfriend that her name is Wendy.She is a very beautiful and cute girl.She come from a beautiful city.She have some hobbies ,such as :paly basketball,cooking. I like her very much.We always go to school together, and play in the garden together. Somebody say we are like sisters.