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Dear Jane; I glad to receive your letter and informed us you will come to china on next month. I think I will take you to my hometown , located in countryside , is a beautiful and small town, there have a great stretch of open field, and many small road amone the field. When I was in child, I always walked the road and singed children's song. There have different scenery at different season. In the spring , you will see many green plants and mass green rice.In the summer, the guys will swimming in the river. In the autumn, that is harvest season, the farmer will harvest their benefits. In the winter, all the plant are sleeping. It is very amazing. I hope to see you soon. Sincerely Helen
