小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足。

We had a new teacher last month,and he had taught us of science. He is strong more than, and he has black and coiled hair,two big ears and big mouth.He often had worn a black shirt and pants, so he wore it this way looks like big black bear on the distance. He is very funny in the class,he usually had waved his lags to Analogy on his class for make us understand bettle. We like him,so I wish he is my teacher always.