高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；复杂句使用不错，句法规范。

"Beauty is only skin deep." This expression means that beauty is only a temporary surface quality.On the contrary，Beauty is the eternal thing and beauty is not only beauty, but also inner beauty. Although a girl is good-looking when she was 18 years old, she is an old woman with bad temper when she is 80 years old.