高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句法方面做得很棒，但是从句不多；请注意积累词汇量，尤其高级词汇的积累。

"Beauty is only skin deep." This expression means that beauty is merely a temporary surface quality. On the contrary，beauty is the eternal thing and beauty is not only beauty, but also inner beauty. Although a girl is good-looking when she was 18 years old, she is just an old woman with bad temper when she is 80 years old.