采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
"Beauty is only skin deep." This expression means that beauty is merely a temporary surface quality. Everyone is attracted by beauty and beauty is powerful. But what is true beauty? On the contrary,beauty is the eternal thing and beauty is not only beauty, but also inner beauty. Although a girl is good-looking when she was 18 years old, she is just an old woman with bad temper when she is 80 years old.