高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

拼写做的很棒，高级词汇可适量增加；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句数量偏少。

"Beauty is only skin deep." This expression means that beauty is merely a temporary surface quality. On the contrary，beauty is the eternal thing and beauty is not only beauty, but also inner beauty. Although a girl is good-looking when she was 18 years old, she is just an old woman with bad temper when she is 80 years old. Thus, beauty is no appearance.Real beauty is come from the heart, A man looks beautiful, a fair face may hide a foul heart again, but the surface beauty. A person has a bland appearance, the heart fastens masses, such person is real beauty, this truth, as we all know, isn't it?