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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒。
"Beauty is only skin deep." This expression means that beauty is merely a temporary surface quality. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this idea. On the contrary，beauty is the eternal thing and beauty is not only beauty, but also inner beauty. A person with good characters may be considered as a beauty. It is not because of his charming appearance, but because of his honesty, kindness and strong will. What's more , she is just an old woman with bad temper although she was a girl with a good-looking appearance when she was 18 years old. Thus, beauty is no appearance.Real beauty is come from the heart, A man looks beautiful, a fair face may hide a foul heart again, but the surface beauty. A person has a bland appearance, the heart fastens masses, such person is real beauty, this truth, as we all know, isn't it?
