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语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
"Beauty is only skin deep." This expression means that beauty is merely a temporary surface quality. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this idea. On the contrary，beauty is the eternal thing and beauty is not only beauty, but also inner beauty. A person with good characters may be considered as a beauty,such as Mother Teresa and Helen keller. It is not because of his charming appearance, but because of his honesty, kindness and strong will. What's more, she is just an old woman with bad temper although she was a girl with a good-looking appearance when she was 18 years old. Thus, beauty is no appearance.Real beauty is come from the heart, A man looks beautiful, a fair face may hide a foul heart again, but the surface beauty. A person has a bland appearance, the heart fastens masses, such person is real beauty, this truth, as we all know, isn't it?
