采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒。
"Beauty is only skin deep." This expression means that beauty is merely a temporary surface quality. From my own perspective, I totally frown on this idea. On the contrary,beauty is the eternal thing and beauty is not only beauty, but also inner beauty. A person with good characters is likely to be considered as a beauty,such as Mother Teresa and Helen Keller. It is not because of his charming appearance, but because of his honesty, kindness and strong will. However, she is just an old woman with bad temper although she was a girl with a good-looking appearance when she was 18 years old. Thus, beauty is no appearance.Real beauty is come from the heart, A man looks beautiful, a fair face may hide a foul heart again, but the surface beauty. A person has a bland appearance, the heart fastens masses, such person is real beauty, this truth, as we all know, isn't it? In a word, good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important. As an old saying goes, "virtue is fairer than beauty". If you have a kind heart, you own real beauty.