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The views about whether college students should hire cleaners are varied. Some students claim that it can help them set aside more time to focus on study or other things rather than the boring cleaning. While others hold that cleaning is also a necessary part in our independent lives. In my view, I support the latter one that college students shouldn't hire cleaners. First of all, I think cleaning is a important thing that every college student should do. Because keeping the dormitory is also a kind of their responsibility which they need to take on. Moreover, it's wise to form a good habit of cleaning in our lives in case that someday we have to rely on nothing but ourselves, for college students are not sure whether they can afford the cleaners in the later society lives. Once you hire a cleaner, you may get used to leaving rubbish there and waiting someone to clean it, which will make others feel bad at you. At last, I believe clean the dormitory won't waste too much of time, let alone influencing your academic achievements. According to what I have discussed above, I strongly suggested the college students to do the cleaning by themselves in that it is bound to help much more than in the future you can imagine.
