高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

"Beauty is only skin deep." This expression means that beauty is merely a temporary surface quality. From my own perspective, I totally frown on this idea. On the contrary，beauty is the eternal thing. What's more, beauty is not only appearance, but also inner beauty. A person who with good characters is likely to be considered as a beauty,such as Mother Teresa and Helen Keller. It is not because of outstanding appearance, but because of their honesty, kindness and strong will. Nevertheless, she is just an old woman with bad temper although she was a girl with a good-looking appearance when she was 18 years old. In a word, good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important. As an old saying goes, "virtue is fairer than beauty". You own real beauty provided that you have a kind heart.