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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

As a saying goes,"it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance". While the saying is seemingly simple and superficial, it is thought-provoking on second thought,reminding us that we should not judge people by their appearance. There are uncountable reasons behind this argument, but following reasons suffice. First of all, a person's success and career have no link to his or her appearance. It is one's powerful ability and rich knowledge that makes success and exert great influence on others, which is powerful retort to that wrong argument. Secondly, a great number of people 's experience may prove that it is wrong to judge a person by appearance. The late CEO of Apple,Jobs,is a case in point. Know for his attention to ability,such as innovation,teamwork and leadership, he attribute his success to pursuit of perfection but not appearance. Base on above analysis, we may easily draw a conclusion that it is one's capability and knowledge,but not appearance that are the rules to judge a person. As a student, everyone should pay attention to more important things, rather than appearance.

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