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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973[网页划词已开启]
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,作者在句法层面做的很棒。

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It’s unwise to judge a Person by their Appearance Have you ever noticed the phenomenon that a person who has a charming appearance seems to have much more chances than his or her counterparts? So is it wise to judge a person by their appearance? The answer is absolutely not. Generally, we are often attracted to somebody first by their appearance and we inclined to get more in touch with them. Meantime, we casually ignore the reality that the inner virtue is the most principle criterion to judge a person. Here are some reasons to illustrate my view. First, people with good manners and kindness are easy to make friends with and cooperate with. Moreover, it also shows that many people without charming appearance even do better in their field than those who have. Finally, one’s appearance is depend on his or her genes, it is inherited, so it can’t be considered as a competitive factor to decide who will in. In a word, it’s the charming qualities rather than appearance that should be considered and cherished.

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