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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中从句使用不丰富；文章词汇词汇丰富度和高级词汇使用熟练度都要继续努力，还要注意单词拼写；语言不流畅。
from:hubin@163.com to:KPOHsales@hotmail.com subject:establish businese relationship Dear sir or mardam I knew your new product No 5670 of your company juring a exhibition holded in newyork on 15th-22th Dec, and i very interesting in it , can sent us a price list and instrution . thanks for your attention and expect we can establish business relationship. thanks hubin
