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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达，高级词汇的使用也较灵活多样；语言不流畅。
From: hubin@163.com To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject: to establish business relationships Dear Sir or Madam I kewn your new product No.5670 during the exhibition of New York on the day 15th-22th Dec, and i am very interesting in it, can you send us a price list and instruction . Thanks for your attention, and we are expecting to establish business relationships Thanks and wish your eary reply. Hubin
