文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;语言不流畅。
To: Mary Chen Date: 23th Dec. 2008 From: Ming Li Dear Mary: I will could not to discuss the things about new year party with everyone, because i will going to BeiJing tomorrow have a trip for a week. so please tell me the decide of time and place, and the requitment. Thanks