题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
要求
1.对这种做法有人表示支持文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
with the pressure of nowadays' society, students are given advises that the study and mares are the first .and so as to improve their marks that avoid losing others , more and more parents send their kids to art classes. for this , some people feel that it is good for kids.all for that is to improve their marks in every apart.in today's society , it have a heat competition between everyone. kids must have a better ability to adapt it. but another voices appeared.they regards that it will strength kids pressure.they should have a happy and relax childhood .they should have their regular life , and it is not necessary. as far as i am concerned, it should have a suitable schedule for kids , kids should have a funny time .marks can not represent everything.
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