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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2057
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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with the pressure of nowadays' society, students are given advises that the study and mares are the first .and so as to improve their marks that avoid losing others , more and more parents send their kids to art classes. for this , some people feel that it is good for kids.all for that is to improve their marks in every apart.in today's society , it have a heat competition between everyone. kids must have a better ability to adapt it. but another voices appeared.they regards that it will strength kids pressure.they should have a happy and relax childhood .they should have their regular life , and it is not necessary. as far as i am concerned, it should have a suitable schedule for kids , kids should have a funny time .marks can not represent everything.

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