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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12877
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

The way people's communication changed with the Internet development, In the past, people used writer and face-to-face communication, but now, people can't writer and more and more less time face-to-face communicate. They lossed on the Internet. The most importent is some times person don't know however who chating with you,boy or girl ? young or old ? ture or lie ? In my view,electronic communication can't replace face-to-face contact.First, people can not never talk with prason in life on face-to-face. Second. Electronic communication can't good at show our feeling. Last but not lest, People will chose face-to-face communicate even though the Internet fast development. In a word, face-to-face is the best way to communicate with each other,so put down you phone and more communicate with you family and friend!

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