2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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At the present ,most childrens are the apple of parents' eys ,no matter what children said and parents also say "right" .parents help children to do something so that they have not enough society experence ,they have not ability to independent .then, I have some advice to parents . first of all ,you should give a lot of time for children deal with things by themselves .the second ,when they have trouble and you wouldn't easy to help them ,they should study how to face .last but not least ,making them approach the society ,don't only abandon in study .