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作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
As a saying goes, "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it". While the saying is simple and common, it is seemingly thought-provoking on second thought, reminding us that we should time and energy doing some more valuable things. As we all know, helping other faced troubles is one of the most meaningful things in our whole life. Leifeng, a well-known moral model, is a case in point. He had been assisting poor people and families in his whole life, such as donation, helping to washing clothes and cooking and investing education, which had an positive and long effect on society and individuals. Obviously, helping others through doing some things ,even if small things,has outlasted the leifeng's life. Based on above analysis, we may easily draw a conclusion that we ought to spend our life for more meaningful things. As a student, I decide to get away from Internet games,which is a vast wast of life. Meanwhile, I want to devote my time and energy to helping others and learning more knowledge.
