2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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if my foreign friend come to visit me, the jiefangbei will be my first choice to show around to my friend. this is a intersting and attracted place in chongqing, in my opinon, he will like it. there is a combination of factors to explain the reson why i choose jiefangbei. to begin with, jiefangbei is the cultral pleace with long history. the bei was built long time ago, and it was symbol that chongqing released by japan.second, jiefangbei gathers a lot of person from all over the world because of its beauty, so my friend can talk with various of person, enjoying the kind from chongqing person. last but not least, plenty of hotpan restruats was opened. hotpan is chongqing's speacial food, similar to caracter of chongqing person, hot and striked. I am so looking forward to see my friend! long time no see.