小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

A picture on my desk about Jim's family climbed a mountain. Stand in the front row who Jim and Susana are, their mother and father stand behind , and this is Aric and Marie. Aric was a doctor for children worked in the Saint Mary Hospital. Marie was a science teacher at middle shcool. Jim and Susana were students both, and they had studied in the shcool where their mother teaches. I love they , by the way Jim is me.