题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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on maintaining trust Recently,a series of society issues happened to serve as a reminder of the trust among all the relationships,which gave rise to a storm of discussion around this hot,but old, topic.It`s evident that the current life was full of cool and distance concerned about the happiness index for the humans. History has already proved to us in its unique that the trust plays an essential role in creating a sort of ideal and hospitality atmosphere in our world.Of course,I can`t disagree this idea any more,for the simple reason that as we humans live in one world,we can`t be isolated from others in any time.Besides,trust can help relieve the tension and stimulate a cozy atmosphere,where we can talk freely and try our best to give room to others. Moreover,we can avoid to be trapped into the awkward situation while we brought about an argument,just because of trust.Finally,trust,in some particular occasions,can have influence on some significant ceremony,in which you can express your love to girls or boys and even stress your loyalty to the organizations or clubs. From my perspective,I place more importance on the trust between people and animals,for the belief that every one in the world was born with the rights that we ought to possess trust,not cheat.