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This is my house that it is locate near the road. It is a building that tow floors,there has a big and planus field in fornt of the house and many childen will come and play. In the first floor, there have a big sitting room. It too big that we cannot but usd tow lamps to lighter more than. This is our dining room where behind the sitting room and we have a meal at here. Behind the dining room is our cookroom that small than dining room a lit, my mother often cooked some delicious food in the kitchen. In the second, there have my badroom where at the east of the room, my parents's room where it's on the right siad of mine. These are very big both, It's very comfortable when we live in it. This my house, i like it very much, do you like it?