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小学二年级英语作文:Our house

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:49浏览次数:5576
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用英语描述下自己的家,字数在100字以内.
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从句使用偏少;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章能较灵活使用词汇,高级词汇有些少,还需注意个别拼写错误。

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This is my house that it is locate near the road. It is a building that tow floors,there has a big and planus field in fornt of the house and many childen will come and play. In the first floor, there have a big sitting room. It too big that we cannot but usd tow lamps to lighter more than. This is our dining room where behind the sitting room and we have a meal at here. Behind the dining room is our cookroom that small than dining room a lit, my mother often cooked some delicious food in the kitchen. In the second, there have my badroom where at the east of the room, my parents's room where it's on the right siad of mine. These are very big both, It's very comfortable when we live in it. This my house, i like it very much, do you like it?

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