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It is well-known that chinese celebrate the dragon boat festival in honor of an ancient poet ,Quyuan.In this day, we are supposed to eat various types of dumplings wrapped by leaves.The cheerful crowed will also pour by the river bank to see boats with colorful decorations in which groups from different villages coorperate together to compete with each other.I believe the reason why Chinese people commonly keep humble and hardworking is that the nation going through two thousand years' ups and downs always pay their respect to ancient saints and deeds in many ways.Apart from that,chinese who always persue peace and happiness are crazy about grand festival when people,old and young,men and women,come togother to enjoy the happy moment. No matter what festival are, they all remark the genious and braves of chinese people.
