2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨。

On tenth of April Xing Guang High School organised all the students of the school to climb Daqing Mountain as one of the spring activities. Totally about 500 students from the all kinds of the grades attended the climbing.They were so excited and positive that they prepared their plans on the climbing in advance.For example, some classes hold the climbing competition,some classes asked the students to write down the feelings about the climbing on the Daqing Mountain. Others hold the "cleaning the mountain" activity that called the students to pick up the rabbish which was thrown by visitors to protect our environment.All the student enjoyed this climbing. The climbing not only gives the students a lot of funny that makes them relax from their heavy studying but also have a change to keep a close touch with the nature.