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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
With much better living standards nowadays, a majority of students enjoy a comfortable life. Some students are generous and spend money buying whatever they want, while others who are more economical are with the money they spend. From the perspective of my view, pupils should use money properly as well as correctly. The reasons for my opinion are as follows. To begin with, we students must fully realize that the money we spend are from our parents' hard work. We are our parents' children, nevertheless we still have no right to squander the money they earned. Besides, I believe that getting into a habit of considering before we buy something can do us a favor in later lives. For example, we won't buy some useless stuff just because of an impulse or be cheated by vendors because we don't think it over. Lastly, once we get used to spending money as we like, we will find it difficult to save money or even stop wasting it. I can come to the conclusion that as a student, we had better have a idea of the necessity of spending money in a proper way. It doesn't mean to be a miserly person but to be a reasonable one.
