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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句数量偏少;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Dear Sir I am a standing member of our local community and I am writing a recommendation to other citizens for our fine neighbourhood dinning establishments : The Lone Star Cafe. There are many impressive atributes which struck me upon my entrance, such as the deco and the ambience. But what for my mind it was the service alone with the size and the quality of the portions that waas most memorable. The service was professional yet intimate, and alone with the sheer quantity of the dishes served, motivated me to pass on my recommandation. I enjoyed the roast steak which is imported form Finland, it tastes fresh and tender, and also everydays special never fail to supprise me each time I got there. I hope after reading this , potential customers will frequent this dinner Your sincerely

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