北京通州区2013届九年级上学期期末试卷英语作文:别人帮助你

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Help others are happy thing.When someone needs help ,we are going to help them. This is an interesting thing. Last summer,I took bus went home .On the bus,I saw the out of window view,suddenly ,a wear shabby clothes and nervous man yelled to me ,I am very feared,then a gentle man loud says: stop! stop to talk to a lady .My feeling immediately better than before. When you suffer difficult some one help you,you will get some comfortable ,then thing will be to easier. help others are happy and interesting things.