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Undeniable, due to fast developement of human societ, animal species and plants are facing virigous threaten which caused lost of rare speciaces dispared ,even though huge efforts have been made to prevent that. Therefore, it was raised doubts is it to late to protect our planet.this assay will disscuss about this question. About 2 hundreds years ago, steam engine was invented, since that human society stepped into a new earge, Industral Society. we can catch there were huge of impact and fast development were changing ourselves, not just in induestral area but also the whole environment. Fossiol fule demanding was seriously roase, alone with nastally environmental problems, air and groudwater sollution damaged lots of species's settlements, many animanl and plants dispared. "We are on the tipping point, it's time to make something different" more and more people strat to apple. And also, many policies were implement by many counties and orangitions, we can see people were doing their effort to make a change. Due to a series of activites, like water purifying project, and hoursewarm gas reducing laws were published which show the people's determination. take city for example, decades ago, with more trees were planted and with the effort of government to shut down serval air pulliton factories, I can see a greet improverment in our environment. All in all, as long as we keeping effort to resolve problems and along with the technic development, I believe on a certain day we could make balance betweent enviroment and human society.
