采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,但词汇表达丰富度不足。
I have a good friend his name was DASB . we often go to school together, And then , we always play computer game together. what more ,he often encourage me when i in trouble he is very handsome and kind , he often help his parent to clean the room he is my best friedn morever